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Thursday, January 9, 2020

Activity 3: The Diary of Anne Frank

Dear diary, 
This is another summer learning journey activity. So today for the activity today It says to :
So I have done this except I put into a book creator book. I Had to make my own extraordinary diary entry  about something. I choose to write about a red panda that had invisible wings. It took me a long time to write the story because I wanted it to make sense and be interesting. 

What I found easy was thinking about what the red panda was up to. using a new creative way of showing my diary was hard for me.This activity was very fun to do because I got to use my own imagination to think of ideas to make it fun to read. I hope you enjoy reading my book! Feel free to comment.




                   



you can skip this bit if you know what the summer learning journey is.

The summer learning journey is where you do  blogging you  do so you don't go down the summer slide. 

what is the summer slide?
The summer slide is what you go down during the long summer break
it makes you lose 1 month of reading and writing and lots more.
If you go down the summer slide it will take a long time for you too get back to your right level of your learning. So we do the Summer Learning Journey to keep up our right level of learning journey.

So this group of people decided to make the summer learning journey
and also you can call it SLJ it is short for Summer Learning Journey. So kids don't go down lots of levels in their learning it can also make kids go up in learning. 

So if you do the summer learning journey it might help you with your learning and make you learn something new. The foundents that participate in it is : Next foundation ,Wright family foundation, Hugo charitable trust, and Manaiakalani the hook from heaven. 
       

6 comments:

  1. Mōrena Jordan,

    Congratulations on completing yet another activity! I'm so impressed by the amount of time and effort you're putting into working on the Summer Learning Journey programme - he whetū koe! :) (You're a star!)

    What a great way to present your diary entry! You're the very first SLJ blogger that I've come across who has completed the activity in this way - very original! :) I'm so pleased to see you being cyber-smart and covering your private information as well - very good thinking! Well done for remembering to attribute the images you used as well.

    You've written an awesome little story as well, Jordan. Imagine if a red panda really DID make it's way to your school! I'm sure it'd cause quite a bit of excitement. Are red pandas your favourite animal why you've decided to write about them?

    Have a wonderful day, Jordan. Keep up the fantastic blogging! :)

    Mā te wā,

    Mikey

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    1. Good afternoon Mikey,

      Well I wouldn't say red panda's are my favorite but I like them. I Just thought they are quiet extraordinaire for my story. What is your favorite animal ? And what is your hobbies?

      - Jordan:+D

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    2. Hi Jordan,

      Oh! Well they were a great choice. What is your favourite animal? Mine's an elephant. Although, I learnt about Golden snub-nosed monkeys on an episode of Seven Worlds, One Planet and now I really like them too.

      At the moment my hobbies are reading and spending lots of time at the beach - I love being in, on and around the water. I also like playing sports. Especially netball. What are your hobbies?

      Bye for now,

      Mikey :)

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    3. Hello Mikey,

      Well my favorite animal is cats and also dogs, thank you for your very sweet reply.

      Well at the moment my hobbies are:
      writing, watching youtube, going for walks at the beach, and lastly but not least eating shopping.

      What is your favorite youtuber?

      Bye for now,

      Jordan :)

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  2. Hello again Jordan!
    Great job on completing another great task!
    I can see that you have put so much effort into this post! I especially loved that you used my feedback and created a screencastify to share your diary, I think it makes it more personal. Do you enjoy using screencastify?

    Next time do you think you could do more screencastifys? I think this will make your post really interesting to your viewers.

    Goodbye for now!
    Until next time
    - Nadia :)

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    1. Hello again Nadia,

      Thank you for the impressive comment! Yes I absolutely enjoy using screencastify. Yes I will try to do more screencastify, Have you been enjoying your break?

      Have you spent any time with friends? Have a incredible day.

      Enjoy comment!

      - Jordan :+D

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