Bai Yun Reunites

 Hello Readers!

For the past few weeks, I've been writing part two of Bai Yun. This time it is more amusing and includes more fantasy. I used Grammarly to help me write this story and make sure the story made sense. The easiest part of using grammarly was fixing my mistakes. Another website I used to help me is called thesaurus. It's a website that tells you words you can use instead of using a boring words. For example, you can use spoken instead of said. 

After I finished part two of Bai Yun I read it to make sure it made sense.  Next time I'm going to try to include more unique words. Cause I didn't get the best score for it. Thinking of ideas was complicated for me. Re-reading my story to fix any mistakes was effortless for me. I hope you enjoyed my blog post.

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  Bai Yun Reunites One mysterious day Bai -Yun had a feeling something interesting was going to happen. So she starts exploring as she does every day. Suddenly this magical portal appeared. This portal leads to a world called Palanda. Palanda is a world not like any other world. It doesn't matter what size, shape, or form you are, everyone's included. As the sun rises in Palanda, every panda wakes up and says a traditional prayer to have a long, happy life. Among the seas of Palanda there are three different types of boats. Blue boat to travel, to collect food you use a brown boat and purple boat for rescue uses. Bai -Yun decided she wanted to travel across the sea to find some friends. Bai-Yun enters the blue boat and finds two pandas who seem friendly there named Ling-Ling and Po. They are both females and come from the east side of Palanda. Ling Ling begins to introduce herself; she is from the east-west of Palanda, her family are fashion designers. Po acquaints herself. She says she is from the south-east of Palanda. Po's family creates art. Finally, Bai -Yun introduces herself Bai-Yun says; she is from the earth and transported to Palanda from a portal. Ling-Ling was very curious about Bai Yun. So she began asking questions about why Bai Yun came to Palanda. " Do you have any family here?" Ling-Ling asks. " My mother once said I have two siblings who live in another world. It might be this world I am trying to look for them." Po joins the conversation, " that is genuinely interesting. Are we able to help?" " Yes, you are. You guys will make it way easier for me to find my long-lost siblings. The boat arrives at a destination. This place is extraordinarily unique to Palanda because it has the most beautiful views and delightful food. Po is very familiar with this city because this is where she got raised. They exit and spot a restaurant. It's called " Foo San," It's the restaurant Po used to go to for every celebration. Food comes to the table and looks ambrosial. After they take their first bite, they can't stop. The food is spectacular and delicious. Po spots her favorite mall and tells the others. Then they walk to the mall in excitement. Bai Yun enters the mall first because she is thrilled. The first store they all spot is a store full of teddies! Ling-Ling loves teddies so do the others Ling-Ling ran into the store with excitement. She spots two pandas looking at purple dinosaur teddies. Both of the pandas look similar to Bai Yun. So she asks them what their names are. The male panda says his name is Tai Shan the female says her name is Mei Lan. " Do you guys have any other siblings?" asks Ling-Ling. " Yes, and we're trying to find them," says Mei Lan. " Oh, I have a friend who is also trying to find her siblings as well. Do you know your long-lost sibling's name?" Says Ling- Ling. " Yeah, her name is Bai Yun," says Tai Shan. " That is the name of my friend. Do you want to meet her?" "Of course we do," says the long-lost siblings. Tai Shan and Mei Lan go to look for Bai Yun. Mei Lan finds Bai Yun and tells her that they are siblings. Bai Yun is astonished that she finally met her long-lost siblings she's been trying to find. Both Mei Lan and Tai Shan are thrilled to be together forever.

Bai Yun the Explorer 🐼

 Hello Readers!

During lock-down I have been writing a story about a panda who discovers a red and white bus. This is activity I choose from the lock-down activities my teacher set my class. I got inspiration from a image of a bus that is red in white covered in green leaves. At first I wasn't really sure what I should write about but then I thought of my favourite animal discovering a bus. So that is why my story is about a panda finding a bus. It took me a long time to find the perfect name for this panda, in the end I decided to name the panda Bai Yun which means white cloud in Chinese and is named after a famous female panda. 

If the red  and white bus was your inspiration, what would you write about?

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 Bai Yun the explorer 🐼 

One dreamy breezy day a young fierce furry female panda was released to the wild. This young chap is named Bai Yun which means white cloud in Chinese, Yun (cloud) for short. Yun loves exploring everything one day when Bai Yun was out with her mother she was observing the different bamboos in the forest. She got inspired and wrote a whole story about the difference between all of the bamboo's sizes and shapes.

On this breezy day Yun was exploring and suddenly noticed a dazzling lingering trail. But what Bai Yun didn’t know was that there are multiple obstacles throughout the trail. As she starts wandering through the trail she suddenly sees the first obstacle but she doesn’t stop she keeps going. The first obstacle hurdles but there is a twist, you have to jump over all of the hurdles in one minute. 

Bai Yun begins the obstacle and feels very hysterical and thinks she won’t be able to finish the obstacle on time. 30 seconds later, Yun has gone through half of the hurdles. She now feels more confident in herself and in 50 seconds she manages to go through all of the hurdles.  Five minutes later… Yun comes across the next obstacle. This obstacle seems to be very exotic to yun, because it is a puzzle that you have to solve and she loves to do puzzles and put pieces together.

This obstacle was the last one but this obstacle was not easy, Yun is very good at solving puzzles but this puzzle isn’t like any other puzzle. To be able to solve this puzzle you have to work out a riddle. Bai Yun thought this would be as hard as a rock. The riddle was easier than she thought. You only had to unscramble the letters to create a sentence; it was as easy as buttering toast. As Bai Yun initiated the actual puzzle she felt tormented about what was going to happen when she reaches the end of the trail.  

Finally, Yun consummates the trail and discovers this interesting long red and white thing on wheels that she has never seen before. Bai Yun suddenly gets the urge to go into this thing that she has never seen before. As she wanders into the thing she sees a sign saying bus so now she found out that this thing is a bus. Inside of this bus, there is a comfy bed that has very soft and snug pillows. However, this bus isn’t just a normal bus, this bus has been here for thirteen years.

Many people would believe that this is just a bus abandoned but it is a part of history. Bai Yun thinks that this bus is extremely precious and has made herself at home. Especially since it has everything you need to survive even an aggregate pantry of food. At the end of the day, Bai Yun was very ecstatic about what she had found and that she went down the trail.