Space Acrostic Poem

Today In Miss Goslins  literacy group we had to read this and we had to do a activity that is a Acrostic poem .It had to be about space ,and I choose to do it about Saturn. what I found easy was writing Saturn down the page,What I found hard was making the sentences . I found this activity quite  challenging. feel free to comment.

Space writing

Hey readers,This week in literacy we have being learning about  space, and we had to  do some  writing about a planet . And I choose to do it about  Saturn rings , cause i'm most interested in
Saturn .  What was hard was finding facts about it , what I found easy was  writing about what I thought  it was . 

                                 Saturn's rings 

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Harry!!! I arrived in space ,Now let's explore,First let’s find out some facts about it , first let’s see what is smells , in my opinion, it smells like rainbow ring candy. They seem very thick but up close the rings are very thin, I think it is made out of chunks of ice  from Antarctica cause it seems to look kinda icy. I hear weird noises from the planet and rings knocking together. I'm Proud to be in space !!! facts: Most of the rings are made out of water and ice,the colors of rings are pink ,yellow , blue , green, icy blue.I think Saturn is made out of  rocks and other stuff similar . I tried to go on the rings but I kept on bouncing. I wonder if it will taste like candy.