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Thursday, July 25, 2019

Space writing

Hey readers,This week in literacy we have being learning about  space, and we had to  do some  writing about a planet . And I choose to do it about  Saturn rings , cause i'm most interested in
Saturn .  What was hard was finding facts about it , what I found easy was  writing about what I thought  it was . 


                                 Saturn's rings 


Harry!!! I arrived in space ,Now let's explore,First let’s find out some facts about it , first let’s see what is smells , in my opinion, it smells like rainbow ring candy. They seem very thick but up close the rings are very thin, I think it is made out of chunks of ice  from Antarctica cause it seems to look kinda icy. I hear weird noises from the planet and rings knocking together. I'm Proud to be in space !!! facts: Most of the rings are made out of water and ice,the colors of rings are pink ,yellow , blue , green, icy blue.I think Saturn is made out of  rocks and other stuff similar . I tried to go on the rings but I kept on bouncing. I wonder if it will taste like candy. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Their Jordan its me Sapphire from Wigram primary school.
    I really like the the way you added key words and other stuff just like that.
    I think your work i awesome because of all the things that you write and make .
    We learnt about space to it was 6 weeks ago but it was a lot of time to get it done.
    Did you know that space is very important.
    When did you make this? and how did you make this?

    But after all a blog post is always the best
    Fro Sapphire

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