yesterday we have being doing key words about us. So we can learn how to introduce our self . we had to have things like our hair eyes and stuff like that . I struggled to make the picture , and found it easy to write the facts down .
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Saturday, July 27, 2019
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Hi Jordan its me Sapphire from wigram primary school.I really like how you added the really cool amazing fonts and i like how it was really good key words about you.Next time you could maybe add a little bit more information.Did you know that sometimes when you use information about you some stuff is okay but some stuff is not.I have one Question why did you do this about you? We learnt about key words to in writing so it just goes along to say some schools do the same thing.I think your work is awesome because of the steps like 1 2 3 4.After all tho a piece a writing or something else is always good.
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Hi Sapphire it's me Jordan from south hornby school. Thx for the feedback , I did this in reading.And we did it about our self because we are learning to do more things about our self and we learnt about key words.
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