I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MΔnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora readers, Last week In Mrs Jones writing group we wrote about Mr Indifferent we first watched a video of him to see what we needed to write about. Next we had to make a y chart with what he looked his characteristics and what he did. Then we had to make a burger plan with some of the stuff on the y chart we put on the burger plan.
After all the planing we started our interesting writing , I also added a plan to my writing. My favorite bit from the video was when Mr Indifferent face turned completely strange, My less favorite thing about it was seeing how selfish he was. Here is my work and the video I had to watch. Feel free to comment.
