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Kia ora readers, Last week In Mrs Jones writing group we wrote about Mr Indifferent we first watched a video of him to see what we needed to write about. Next we had to make a y chart with what he looked his characteristics and what he did. Then we had to make a burger plan with some of the stuff on the y chart we put on the burger plan.
After all the planing we started our interesting writing , I also added a plan to my writing. My favorite bit from the video was when Mr Indifferent face turned completely strange, My less favorite thing about it was seeing how selfish he was. Here is my work and the video I had to watch. Feel free to comment.
Hey Jordan, I really enjoyed your recap of the short video. I had previously watched it and found it really interesting. I think it's crazy how different it makes you feel when you start doing things for others. That warm fuzzy feeling is pretty good, don't you think! I really liked your description of Mr Indifferent all of the smilies you used were fantastic! Great work.
Great question! My favourite type of writing to write is creative writing, in particular I love writing narratives. My personal favourite activity is writing either prequels or sequels to existing stories. What about you? Do you do any type of free writing?
Awesome reply, hmm... probably my favorite type of writing I think it is called character writing and you write about a character. What is your favorite country to travel to ?
oooo interesting! I guess this piece of writing is a type of character description isn't it? What type of characters do you prefer to describe - the bad guy or the hero? I haven't been to all the countries... yet! But from the places we have been I loved Hawaii and New York! What about you?
ooooo very nice! hmm I yet one new fact about me I have been overseas before, Probably my favorite country is malaysia because it is hot over there and there is a lego land there.
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Hey Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your recap of the short video. I had previously watched it and found it really interesting. I think it's crazy how different it makes you feel when you start doing things for others. That warm fuzzy feeling is pretty good, don't you think! I really liked your description of Mr Indifferent all of the smilies you used were fantastic!
Great work.
Kia ora Miss Morgan,
Deletethanks for commenting on my blog, I do think the warm fuzzy pretty good. What is your favorite type of writing?
- Jordan
Great question!
DeleteMy favourite type of writing to write is creative writing, in particular I love writing narratives. My personal favourite activity is writing either prequels or sequels to existing stories. What about you? Do you do any type of free writing?
Awesome reply,
Deletehmm... probably my favorite type of writing I think it is called character writing and you write about a character. What is your favorite country to travel to ?
oooo interesting! I guess this piece of writing is a type of character description isn't it? What type of characters do you prefer to describe - the bad guy or the hero?
DeleteI haven't been to all the countries... yet! But from the places we have been I loved Hawaii and New York! What about you?
ooooo very nice! hmm I yet one new fact about me I have been overseas before, Probably my favorite country is malaysia because it is hot over there and there is a lego land there.
DeleteAnd I don't really know what type of character I like to write about. What about you?
Delete-Jordan