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Saturday, April 18, 2020

Narrative about pigeon impossible

Kia ora readers! Last week in Mrs Jones writing class we wrote a story about a pigeon and a secret agent we had to make it a narrative. First we watched the video after that we did two plans, then we started our marvelous writing

For me this was quite easy because I have written about this video before, my less favorite thing was doing the plan. My favorite thing was watching the video, I have done this writing before so it wasn't that interesting to write about. Feel free to comment!
                             

                     Pigeon Impossible                  
                                                                  
                                                                                     
 One bright day in washington dc  a agent comes across the road. He has a black suit on, and has a black bow tie on with a white t-shirt. He is mid tall and he has brown hair, he kinda has big eyes the secret agent walks around with his briefcase all the time. A fact about this agent he eats bagels.


POW!!!… its a monday morning and the agent has his break. For his break he sits down on a dark green seat and officiously has a bagel. As he takes a bite this annoying pigeon with eyes as tiny as m&ms wants some. The agent gives a little bit to the pigeon… but then!!!! The annoying pigeon takes the whole bagel :( 
After all that mess the agent opens his briefcase as that is happening the pigeon gets sneaky and goes into the agents briefcase. PWE PWE, the pigeon bumps all these weird buttons the first one he bumped it turned on lasers.  

The secret agent throws the bagel in the air the agent gets the pigeon out of the agents briefcase, then the bagel lands on a red button. 321 blast of the red button puts of a rocket or missile. This Rocket ( or missile) goes to russia, the day gets saved, because the rocket fell on the pigeon.


The End

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