Letter to Mrs Claus

For Literacy this week we have being watching a  video about  this   little  boy  who is really annoying and he let his family dog chew his sisters shoes and then he decided to forgive himself and wrote a letter to Mrs Claus, asking for something really special for his sister because his dog ate his sisters shoes. She got really upset and on christmas day she found a present from her brother and Mrs Claus with some brand new shoes in it. She was then really happy and she gave her little brother a really massive hug. So my teacher Mrs Jack, gave us some options out of writing a letter to Mrs Claus, or to write about the story. I decided to write a letter to Mrs Claus, here is my letter.

  

  

 Dear Mrs Claus …

  

My  Name is Jordan I think I have being good  this year so far .
I am 9 years old . I love to go  swimming ,spending time with
family , giving christmas cards to people Because  it's really
special to me . far I have being  getting a dollar a day.
 Im saving up to get Christmas presents for my  family .
For christmas can  I please  a good and not bad elf
on the shelf  thats a girl I promise I won't touch it ,

can  I also please have a large Squeezemals dog.
Also can  I please have A skateboard , and some safety equipment  .
And last of all A helmet . Thank you so much from Jordan .