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Monday, September 3, 2018

through these couple of weeks we have being working on  a poem called The disgusting dinner
are thing we are doing is a meanu with disgusting food . Here is a question have you ever drinked a slushy ?
here is mine , hope you enjoy my poem, bye bye



The disgusting dinner


Now for the best let's have a side drink   with a

Gigantic  icky squid
Mushy  creepy  slushy


I have to eat some yucky  feet  cause  I am grownede for a week
For tea  I need a big bowl of mushy greasy  stinky old spiders
Then for dessert  we need some creepy old lamb  sliders

3 comments:

  1. Hey Jordan, I really love your post about the disgusting dinner. I love how you really described what you were going to eat. This reminds me of when I was walking in the shop and I saw this gross slimy squid. Maybe next time you should add the most disgusting picture of dinner. Did you really have to eat this for dinner?

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    1. Hi Talia ,thank you for commenting on my post and no I didn't eat this for dinner I just made a random menu for a reading activity.
      -Jordan

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  2. Hey Jordan, I like your poem about the “disgusting dinner” it rhymes to me, I would never like to eat that disgusting dinner!. The gigantic icky squid mushy creepy slushy remind me about how I drank a slushy before, but it wasn’t gigantic icky squid mushy or creepy!. Maybe you should make it “dinner” instead of “tea” because it said “disgusting dinner” and you said “tea”. I have a question, what are sliders? and does grownede suppose to be “grounded?”.

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