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Wednesday, August 22, 2018

my poem

this week we have being  doing  poems this poem that we have done is a 5 line poem it has to talk about a differ't thing in each line so hope you injoy my poem.

              by Jordan
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  1. AnonymousAugust 28, 2018 at 9:52 AM

    Hi Jordan, I really like your post about the cute little kitten. I also like your poem about pets. Is that your kitten of someone else's kitten? Does the kitten have a name.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 28, 2018 at 9:52 AM

    Hey Jordan,
    Nice job on your poem its really cute but maybe next time you should add more to the poem.Jordan is this your Kitten?

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  3. AnonymousAugust 28, 2018 at 2:13 PM


    Hey Jordan, I really like your post about kittens they’re so cute!.It also reminded me of kittens!. Is that your kitten?, does the kitten have a name? If it does, what is it? and why did you do this?

    Hey Jordan, I really like your post about kittens they’re so cute!.It also reminded me of kittens!. Is that your kitten?, does the kitten have a name? If it does, what is it? and why did you do this?

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:19 AM

      thank- you Fria it is not my cat
      it does not have a name. do
      you have a kittien or have you written a poem?
      _ Jordan

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  4. LailaAugust 28, 2018 at 8:17 PM

    Hi Jordan, what a cute kitten! Just like you! How long did it take for you to write this poem Jordan? :) Well done. - Mummy

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  5. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:32 AM

    your cat is cute jordan

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:33 AM

      thanks do you have a cat ?
      bye bye
      - Jordan

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  6. AnonymousNovember 2, 2018 at 10:23 AM

    kia ora Jordan it's me Eduarda I really liked your kitten bye

    -Eduarda

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  7. AnonymousNovember 22, 2018 at 7:13 AM

    hi thank you it isnt my kittien

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