This week in Mrs Jones writing group we have been writing about a lighthouse. So on Tuesday or Monday with Miss W we had to watch a video, then we had to do a plan together. We had to write our introduction and half of our problem. Today we Finished our writing and got it buddy checked and teacher checked.
I enjoyed watching the video, my favourite part of it was when the light house keeper fell on his tool box, because it was kinda funny. I didn't really like doing the plan because my brain wasn't turned on properly at the time. I think it would be pretty cool if I could work at a light house.
I have attached my writing and the light house video bellow.
Please Comment.
Hi Jordan, great blurb and a great story. I like the way the villagers helped the lighthouse keeper. I think it could be lonely being a lighthouse keeper.
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Russell. Yea I think it would be pretty lonely at a light house. Thank you for the comment, have a nice day.
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