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Thursday, April 11, 2019

haswell quarry

A couple of weeks a go my reading class wrote about haswell quarry we went there a month ago but the trip was very fun,What I found challenging was writing it, what I found easy was  finding words to use . I hope you enjoy it ,Feel free to comment.


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  1. Miss GoslinApril 28, 2019 at 5:47 PM

    Hi Jordan, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your story. I like how you added you thought to yourself would you ever take a break? I thought that to myself too! Next time I would like you to self check your writing to see if you need to add any punctuation (eg. full stops).
    Looking forward to hearing back from you.
    Miss Goslin

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    1. AnonymousApril 30, 2019 at 11:23 AM

      Hi Miss Goslin ,
      thank you for commenting on my blog and giving me some feedback,
      I will work on making it better,what type of post should I do next ?

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