This week in writing we wrote a six sentence -story about creating a character and adding detail . our focus is creating sentences.we learnt that the four criteria of sentence are ...
1.It must have one idea .
2. it starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
3. It has one space between each word .
4.our sentences must make sense . what I found easy was planning.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mฤnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, March 22, 2019
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Hi Jordan this is Angela and I really like your story it really makes sense.
ReplyDeletehave you made a a six sentence? your story makes a lot of seance.
I forgot to I will now
DeleteHi Jordan I really like your six sentence story. And by the way where did she stay when she avoided public?
ReplyDeleteHi again and thank you for commenting on my post and by the she stayed in her house until she figured out .
Delete-Jordan