Wanna read about a yellow poem called yellow breeze? then read this

This week for literacy  we have been doing a color poem, it was quiet fun and a tiny bit hard cause we had to make a plan with words to put in sentences,

we used words to make a sentence,what I found challenging was  putting words into sentences ,what  I found easy was finding words for the sentences .

                                  here is my writing.

wanna read a six sentence ?story then read this

This week in writing we wrote a six sentence -story about creating a character and adding detail . our focus is creating sentences.we learnt that the four criteria of sentence are ...
1.It must  have one idea .
2. it starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
3. It has one space between each word .
4.our sentences must make sense .  what I found easy was planning.

Be the change!

Today the 19th of March 2019 ,in punui-o toka  we have been doing a kindness poem ,we had to  write at less 10 sentences ,
we got into groups of three and made a brainstorm about kindness , one of my ideas were giving gifts to others, what I   found easy was brainstorming  , what I found challenging was writing it. feel free to give me some feedback here's my writing

Writing lipo gram Exercise

Today in writing we used a picture prompt  to create lipo -gram .A lipo- gram is a  sentence without using one particulate letter .We had  to write one  intersecting sentence  with out using the letter I.what I found easy was  choosing a

way to set it up . what I found challenging was writing it .

feel free to give  me some feedback.

                        this is mine 

Flames burn on the huge rake  you see some extremely huge meat on the rake  .

Do you want to read about a cotton candy world/ Journey? then read this!

Kia Ora readers!
Today we finished our story about being on the wing of a jet plane here is the picture that we had to describe and put into a story.

What I  found challenging ,was when I pictured a idea ,in my brain and put into a story.




          here is my writing

Hockey Journey!!!

Today, Peter from canterbury hockey has taught us how to dribble,dodge,and stop.what I found challnging was when we learnt how to dribble and stop.what I easy to lean to do is dodge.
we also played a game called rob the nest except We used hockey sticks, and a hockey balls  It was very fun.

Wana find out facts about me ? Read this !

 Past the last week, in Cybersmart we have been learning about shortcuts keys.From the last weeks we had to do a all about me we did a goggle doc then wrote a all about and we had to think about a catchy title, it was easy to think of one ,what I found hard was writing because all of us had to add facts about
us ,answer the question at the end ! feel free to give me some feed -back.

What are some  facts About You guys?