Monday, March 26, 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post. I like the use of adjectives. You have started with a strong hook to grab your readers attention and then you finished with a nice final paragraph. There are a few errors that you can easily fix though. One thing I noticed is that you spelt Antarctica wrong. That shouldn't be too hard for you to fix. You also forgot a few full stops in some places. My last piece of feedback is that you should maybe start off with a paragraph on the top of the post that just explains what you did in class and what it actually is. Sometimes it can be a bit confusing for your blog readers when they don't know what the post is about. I think that in your next posts, you should make sure you explain what the certain Digital Learning Object is. Otherwise this blog post is very good. I hope to see more posts from you.
- Nadia, Hornby High School.
Good tips Nadia.
DeleteKeep practicing Jordy!
ReplyDeleteFrom Jordan to Nabil
DeleteThank you for the great feed back
But I put lots of work on to this
Work now I think mabey you can
Give me proper feed back
Im not trying to be mean